Fixed English
Please help me with fixing English grammatical errors?
(Hi ! I’m an English learner． 2 days later, I will go to take a exam named IELTS, which will decide whether I can go abroad for further study..So these sentence below is my exercise for that, can you people please help me with examining the grammatical errors? If you would do that, please just fix the errors but do not explain it, I think can figure that out..)
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To some rural people who live in the impoverished plight, achieving to graduated from a tertiary school maybe the best way out for them to get rid of poverty. Unfortunately, with diverse assignable causes, generally it seems not possible for them to attain that. To solve this dilemma, it becomes necessary for universities to cut down their standard of recruitment towards these rural students from both financial and academic dimensions.
For some rural people who live in poverty, striving to graduate from a tertiary school may be the best way for them to conquer poverty. Unfortunately, for diverse reasons, generally it is unattainable for them. To solve this dilemma, it becomes necessary for Universities, for both financial and academic reasons, to lower their standards of recruitment for these rural students.
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